deleted12314's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Red Ball and Butterfly]

I admire this work.

It shows how you have a pure heart, something many people of Newgrounds don't have. I must warn you though, there are two things viewers here want: blood and boobs. That's something I've found to be always true. So if you want a great rating, you'll need to become corrupted, but if you want to do what you love, then good job. I hope to see more of your work.

[A Working Class Dream]

Good potential, but I don't understand it!

I really like your smooth style but you should try making something without clocks.

CommunistLock responds:

Thanks, but I admit I'm not too good with human animations.

[-THE STICK-]

Well...

I'm sure this could be interesting for a five year old.

[Pico's Unloaded]

Fucking beatiful

*Cries in joy*

[I miss you Daddy]

You could've done better

I understand your point is to make it sad, but you can't expect most people to feel that way, how you did it. You need to make us know the father as a good person, like a photograph or flashback, so we feel sorry for her. Also, nothing happened. It was too repetitive - you should've maybe put shown the girl watch a tape of the 9/11 attack. I wouldn't usually say this because it's offensive... but... the music was so fucking gay. You can make an emotional moment without gay singing. Infact, the singing distracted us from the girl a bit. Just instumental music would've been better. I really saw no big difference between the beginning, middle, and end. Make events. Best of luck on your next movie.

[Blob Wars Prt. 1 of Ep.1]

What are you doing?!

You completely copied my character design. Not just the 3 circles but the EXACT shading and eyes. You stole my art and got credit for it. Look up Arc Warfare in the search. You'll know what I mean.

Wattr responds:

Dude..i just saw the Arch Warefare thing...that is weird...honestly i thought about this off of the whole kirby stuff and tweeked his looks a bit...i did not try to look like someone elses work...But i will keep going on these for mabey 3 episodes.

[Moonlight]

::Claps::

I can only imagine how hard it must have been to make that movie. The action was simply incredible. I loved it and I'm sure Newgrounds does too. Right now the score is 4.10. I would honestly have it as 4.6. This has been, by far, the greatest animation on Newgrounds ever. Thank you for making my day.

[(old) Mafia: Trailer]

Where do I start

You don't understand something. This isn't Ocean's Eleven we're talking about! A mafia doesn't break into safes! They do not just go break in a place for money! Mafias do personal favors to certain people involving a certain amount of money. Money comes to them, not the other way around. Another thing, you need to lose the beginning song. The Love Theme (By Nino Rita) is one of the most beatiful songs ever made. You need to time it so it's in passionate moment if you want to use it. You obviously will have no passion in your movie, but maybe at the credits you could use it. The Sopranos poster in the back was almost funny. Never use just one little comedic thing in the entire preview. Stick to a genre. If it's a dramatic action comedy, use all three sub genres equally. Another thing, when a preview is submitted, it isn't rated as high as the full movie. Because of the low score people get, they tend to end the project. Show your movie only when it's done, or else it seems like you simply have no patience to complete a good movie. Another thing this movie is lacking is originality. For a good score, you need to have something new and exciting. Just the name Mafia makes people bored. Here's something to get your originality: Study the Godfather. It was Mafia/Romance. Study The Sopranos. It was Mafia/Boobies (As funny as it may seem, that's the factor that made it unique). You can also look at movies like Godson, or The Good Fellas. Every one of those movies have a unique mix. Yours is Mafia/nothing. So good luck with the movie, and try to incorporate something new.

[(no title)]

I'll help you out.

This review will help you so much, so read it if you want to improve.

I'm not a big famous animator on Newgrounds, yet. But remember my name and you'll be glad you've recieved this review. I understand you're new, and I know that you're angry at the bad reviews you've been getting. But, those reviews are great learning tools. If you study the criticisms of the viewers, you'll know what to do next. If they say something isn't good, then improve it on your next movie. I think that there are three general problems with this film: 1. It's the most common type of flash movie on Newgrounds. You see it all the time. There is one dark character that kicks someone's ass. WE've all seen it. Make viewers think, "I wish I thought of that!". 2. You should get sounds from a website called findsounds dot com (You're unable to say an internet adress in a review normally). Search whatever sounds you want, and import them into your movie. It'll make the movie feel alive. 3. Patience is very important. Take your time to make a movie. Personally, I've redone my current project, Arc Warfare, 7 times! Redo until you say, "It's perfect.". Because, if you wait long enough, you'll be able to read a review with someone saying that you're a genious. Well, that's the general help I'll give you. I hope to see a great movie from you, because I see that you have hidden potential for style in specific. Good luck as an animator. - Tin Cetic

efproductions responds:

Very good suggestions, maybe I have been looking at all this the wrong way..

Thanks for the review.