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[Sid Psychotic Episode 1]

Umm...

Uh... um... um... uh... hmmm.... ummm... uh.... uhh... uhhh....hmmm... ummm... yeahhhhhhhhhhh... no

Bloodthirsty-Spike responds:

Hey dude...its a 2 letter word...just say it...'NO'. There...now practice that, then you wont have to bore everyone with your grunts. I appreciate all reviews y'know, just ones that actually have an 'OPINION'. Thanks again ;)

[Glympse]

I'll give you all 10s, so that you're not angry...

1. Why not blind the kid?
2. Why try to save him?
3. Too CORNY with the girl and the one day
4. The music is WAY overused and personally makes me sick
5. Too much text

I don't want to get you down - I know how that feels. Just understand that this is constructive critizism. Good graphics, by the way.

AlmightyHans responds:

What exactly is it that you would change in this movie then? how would you change it? I'd like to know. email me at almightyhans hotmail com

[Tin:The Incompetent Ninja]

OMFG You won't believe it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My first name is Tin. No joke.

SnafuDave responds:

Your kidding. Well Tin it's super awesome too meet you. Can you flip out totally hard and kill people to?

[One fine day...]

I always find constructive criticism helpful.

Here it is:
- Make a storyline that teaches something
- Get a girl for the voice acting of a girl
- Let the audience be sure that it's a comedy
- Take more time to make it
Hope this helps. Good job, btw.

Godlimations responds:

ahahah indeed I'll take it into consideration for the rest of my cartoons :) thanks, but I couldnt care less about this short cartoon.

[part 2: synj vs horrid]

This has the best style in history

I looooove your style. Style. Style! You have STYLE! KEEP IT UP! Sadly, you are making me want to quit animating since I am a loaf of bread compared to you. I love you and hate you at the same time. Either way, beatiful animation.

DanPaladin responds:

thanks! i am glad i inspire, but disappointed i make you want to quit. remember, we all have a learning curve throughout our whole life and animating is a discipline. i used to suck so horrendously bad i'd be blammed right out of here in sheer moments. so keep on going if your heart tells you to! thanks again :D

[Blob Wars pt. II of ep. 1]

You're making me VERY FRUSTRATED

Look at my movie, Arc Warfare. Do you see the similarity? If you make another episode, I'm reporting it to Wade Fulp. I could be cussing my ass off right now, but I'll be nice. This is strike two.

Wattr responds:

ok get this through your fucking head
I DID NOT COPY YOU. holy hell. i have drawings and rough drafts to prove it my god just shut the hell up

[A Working Class Dream]

Good potential, but I don't understand it!

I really like your smooth style but you should try making something without clocks.

CommunistLock responds:

Thanks, but I admit I'm not too good with human animations.

[Blob Wars Prt. 1 of Ep.1]

What are you doing?!

You completely copied my character design. Not just the 3 circles but the EXACT shading and eyes. You stole my art and got credit for it. Look up Arc Warfare in the search. You'll know what I mean.

Wattr responds:

Dude..i just saw the Arch Warefare thing...that is weird...honestly i thought about this off of the whole kirby stuff and tweeked his looks a bit...i did not try to look like someone elses work...But i will keep going on these for mabey 3 episodes.

[(no title)]

I'll help you out.

This review will help you so much, so read it if you want to improve.

I'm not a big famous animator on Newgrounds, yet. But remember my name and you'll be glad you've recieved this review. I understand you're new, and I know that you're angry at the bad reviews you've been getting. But, those reviews are great learning tools. If you study the criticisms of the viewers, you'll know what to do next. If they say something isn't good, then improve it on your next movie. I think that there are three general problems with this film: 1. It's the most common type of flash movie on Newgrounds. You see it all the time. There is one dark character that kicks someone's ass. WE've all seen it. Make viewers think, "I wish I thought of that!". 2. You should get sounds from a website called findsounds dot com (You're unable to say an internet adress in a review normally). Search whatever sounds you want, and import them into your movie. It'll make the movie feel alive. 3. Patience is very important. Take your time to make a movie. Personally, I've redone my current project, Arc Warfare, 7 times! Redo until you say, "It's perfect.". Because, if you wait long enough, you'll be able to read a review with someone saying that you're a genious. Well, that's the general help I'll give you. I hope to see a great movie from you, because I see that you have hidden potential for style in specific. Good luck as an animator. - Tin Cetic

efproductions responds:

Very good suggestions, maybe I have been looking at all this the wrong way..

Thanks for the review.